Sarah Glazer
Nov 1, 20233 min
Updated: Apr 10
At the Clear Language Lab, we help organizations create communications that their audience can understand and use.
Let's talk about some of the most common and easy-to-fix communication issues we see in our work.
Make sure you have a clear goal for content. Otherwise, you might end up with confusing materials that have a “Frankenstein” vibe.
For example, your topic might be "Diabetes in Older Adults." That's a broad topic and it isn't clear what you want people to learn or do from this information.
The same topic with a clear purpose could be something like:
Thriving with Diabetes: Tips for Older Adults
Creating Diabetes Friendly Menus: A Guide for Hospitals and Nursing Homes
How Providers Can Better Support Older Adults Living with Diabetes
You'll notice that having a clear purpose also makes it easier to tell who the intended audience is for this information.
Use simple sentences and active voice to make your action steps clear.
Vague action steps might look something like "Email Mary to RSVP." I'm not sure what to include in my email, and Mary is likely to get flooded with emails that don't have the information she needs.
Instead, you could say something like this example:
Remember to test your processes to make sure people can actually complete the steps the way you intended.
Unfamiliar words can be a barrier to your audience getting the information they need.
Try to use simple everyday language and define technical terms when your audience needs to know them.
Headings make text more accessible!
Without headings, it can be easy to skip important info or even give up if the text is overwhelming!
Headings can include a brief summary of the content or can feature a question that is answered by the text.
Lists are a great way to make dense information feel less overwhelming.
Remember to always introduce lists and use the same grammatical format for each item on the list.
Before you share your materials, double check that you’re not missing any important details.
It’s usually enough to quickly check that you’re answering:
Who is this for?
What is the purpose?
Where does this take place?
When does this take place?
Why should my audience care about this?
We need to use colors that work together with enough contrast. Imagine reading the image on the left on your phone. Not easy!
If your brand colors don’t provide enough contrast with each other, think about using them as accent colors or one at a time.
A design may look great on your computer but be too small to read on a phone.
Designing for the specific format you’re sharing is helpful, too. For example, letter size documents can be difficult to read on social media.
People are less likely to trust QR codes and links that aren’t clearly labeled.
When using an embedded link, don’t just say “click here,” but describe where the link takes you.
Some fonts look cool but are difficult to read at every size.
Stick with fonts that use traditional letter shapes and pay attention to confusing look-a-likes. For example, people sometimes mistake AI (artificial intelligence) for steak sauce or the nickname Al.